Hmm contains just what people want
Good stuff, i really enjoyed the stuff that u had to explain and i suppose u explained it best u can and it came across well, one or twopoints u shud consider changing:
1. Changed the colours because it seems like you are trying to make it look modern but it seems to just look tacky.
2. Add hit areas, someone else put this in a review but i might aswell repeat it in here
3. Change the text colours, red and green are the worst colours u could've chosen. Try white on black or something simple. It may look cooler than u think.
4. Loading time was pretty long for what you have put on there. Try making the music stream download or just delete it cosnonoe wants to hear annoying music whilst try to get around actionscript or animaiton tutorials there annoying as it is.
Man i must sound like a right critiser , but it really was a gd tutorial as it contained gd stuff that helped me more in actionscript.
P.s Gamecubicle sounds a tad jealous in his review.
Just uprade it by the points and it shud look and be amazing.
sure.. ill post it back here when im done
seriously not very informative
it seemed like you tried to kep things simple but the music jsut amde it annoying. Also the pictures were poor graphics i know it wouldve made it bigger but i would have prefered it as i didnt see what u were clicking. Also
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