jackalmike's Reviews

[Decline of Video Gaming 3]

Very good

Not as entertaining as some of the other declines but better in someways. You tend to use more talking jokes rather than animating them. I enjoyed all of them tho but some were just repeats of the other episodes. Bit corny at times which may have been intent on being funny but actually wasnt. Very good cartoon and is this the last in the series? Cos theres a limit to how ma y episodes u can make this long as a console comes out every few years not every few months. This cartoon was not as gd as i expected cos of the time u put in on it.

[Build Me Up Buttercup]

very cool

that really stood out as a great flash, it really had loads of things and it didnt get repetitive. You work together well and shud make another one that really did look ace. A favourite flash

[The Child That Smelt Odd]

Great flash once again

I dont wanna act like an old person and complain....so i wont brilliant flash and even better the way you got the message across of those people that ban things to decrease crime. I saw some of your stranger humour come across throughtout but they made it different. I just finished reading the other reviews. Im not one to find sick strange stuff funny but i found this fucking hilarious. Dont know what the other reviewers are on about when they said this wernt funny at all.
Spread the word this flash owns.

[Super Tutorial 7800x]

Hmm contains just what people want

Good stuff, i really enjoyed the stuff that u had to explain and i suppose u explained it best u can and it came across well, one or twopoints u shud consider changing:
1. Changed the colours because it seems like you are trying to make it look modern but it seems to just look tacky.
2. Add hit areas, someone else put this in a review but i might aswell repeat it in here
3. Change the text colours, red and green are the worst colours u could've chosen. Try white on black or something simple. It may look cooler than u think.
4. Loading time was pretty long for what you have put on there. Try making the music stream download or just delete it cosnonoe wants to hear annoying music whilst try to get around actionscript or animaiton tutorials there annoying as it is.

Man i must sound like a right critiser , but it really was a gd tutorial as it contained gd stuff that helped me more in actionscript.

P.s Gamecubicle sounds a tad jealous in his review.

Just uprade it by the points and it shud look and be amazing.

Nice Job

Yoogain responds:

sure.. ill post it back here when im done

[flashforbeginners:script]

seriously not very informative

it seemed like you tried to kep things simple but the music jsut amde it annoying. Also the pictures were poor graphics i know it wouldve made it bigger but i would have prefered it as i didnt see what u were clicking. Also